Tuesday, August 11, 2009

Aafia's Fanfiction (Draft)

SpongeBob Square Pants in Love!!

One early morning SpongeBob decided to spend his day at the beach. He sat in the beautiful shining sun, feeling lonely. He thought no matter how many people are around you and no matter how many things you have in your “to do list” there is always a need of a special person, a person who is always close to you, a person whom you can share almost everything without a doubt, he felt the need of that person at that very moment.

After enjoying the lovely sunset, as soon as he gets home, Patrick cheerfully brings an invitation to a party. Both of them get ready, head towards the boat and drive to the party. As soon as they enter the doors of the restaurant Patrick run towards the party food excitedly, which was deliciously set out on the tables. On the other hand Sponge Bob who is still feeling lonely, his eyes suddenly strike Pearl dancing and enjoying herself on the dance floor along with her group of friends. She is in her purple long silk dress which is shimmering through her body as she moves with the slow and mesmerizing music.

“She is just perfect” he says in his low voice and eyes wide open. That was the moment, which SpongeBob had never experienced before in his life, for a few minutes he didn’t understand what was going on, so he stood up and slowly moved towards her, each step he took made him feel so much closer to his love and far from the loneliness and Sponge Bob thought to himself “she looks so innocent and full of life”.

SpongeBob reached closer to Pearl and asked “Pearl may I have the pleasure of dancing with you?” Pearl replied “sure, why not!” Spongebob held her gently, and slowly they danced with the slow pace of the romantic music in the beautiful night. While dancing SpongeBob invited Pearl for dinner the next day, and wished that this moment of glory could never end.

Next morning, when SpongeBob reaches the krusty krab, he is feeling happier than ever before. Squid Ward and Patrick are surprised to see a different kind of happiness in his eyes and his glowing face.
Patrick who considered SpongeBob as his best friend, felt neglected, but sponge bob, who was only thinking about pearl, never realised about Patrick’s feelings.

After work that afternoon SpongeBob gets ready for dinner, he decides to dress casually, jumps on his boat and drives to the restaurant, he enters the door, fixes his tie and sits on a table, waiting for pearl, 10 minutes go by and she is still hasn’t arrived, so he decides to move to a table which is closer to the window, which gave a nice romantic view of the sea. After a few minutes pearl arrives, “wow she looks gorgeous”, sponge can’t stop these words coming from his mouth.
They sit for a while and SpongeBob stares in pearls eyes the whole night, pearl doesn’t realise it. they go out several more times ,but SpongeBob never manages to express his feelings, because he is scared to lose his love, sacred of the rejection and the loneliness but he also has high expectations due to which he keeps trying, to express his feelings

SpongeBob decides to share this matter with sandy, so she can help him, sandy is very surprised but as a good friend she prepares SpongeBob and arranges a party at her house, where pearl and SpongeBob are both invited.

So the day comes, SpongeBob is nervous and excited at the same time, everyone is enjoying the party, while SpongeBob is preparing himself to express his love. Finally he manages to go near pearl and asks for a dance, while they are dancing, SpongeBob feels that this is the only opportunity to express whatever is in his heart, SpongeBob ,who can talk for hours without getting tired, today only three words have become so hard for him to say,

The moment finally comes:
Sponge: “pearl I just want to say something” pearl: “what is it sponge?”
Sponge: “ahhhh, I think I’m in love”
Pearl jumps with an excitement, “with who sponge tell me tell me!”
Sponge “I love you pearl, yes I love you!”
Pearl is shocked and suddenly, her hands loosen up slowly leaving SpongeBob’s hand, she never expected these words from SpongeBob.
But somehow pearl manages to reply “ aww, sponge I’m so sorry, but umm, I never thought of you this sway, I’ve always considered you as a good friend only, I’ve always been with my friends, I love them and that’s my life, I don’t think I can ever love anyone, because I don’t believe in love.

SpongeBob who had high expectations never expected this answer from her, after hearing this, he couldn’t feel, hear or see anything , everything disappeared, and a feeling of isolation came back to his heart, it was worse than a nightmare. The Memories of their good times in his heart and mind just wouldn’t leave him. Sandy, Patrick even squid ward tried to help but nothing could help at that horrible moment, he sees nothing but pearl, he hears nothing but pearl. He locked himself in his house and didn’t talk to anyone. Suddenly he became so sensitive, no one ever expected to see SpongeBob like this.

After a few months, One day Mr krabs meets sponge bobs, he says “look SpongeBob, this is life and there are always good and bad times, things happen beyond our expectations, everyone has to face them, please Bring back the old sponge bob, we miss him.” “Sponge bob gets up and hugs Mr karb and cries out loud. “ok that’s enough boy, comeback to crust crab, I’m losing me money because of you...” Mr Krab says.

Next morning SpongeBob apologises to Patrick and leaves for work, saying “I’m ready, I’m ready”. SpongeBob lives happily ever After with his friends.

The End

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  3. Firstly, thank your comment posted on my draft; it was quite useful for Me.!
    In your text I can see many creative and freshing ideas it is good to combined two story into one. Though I had to read a few times to be able to get the ideas but overall it's interesting. Good work!

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