Mamma Mia - No More Lonely Nights
He sat next to her and grabbed her arm tenderly. She startled and raised her eyes to meet his gaze. She was very confused. She never thought that caring attitude could melt her so fast. In fact, it was that very spark that drew her attention in the first place.
“You have nothing to regret or be scared about. My darling Donna, close your eyes”
The tickle of his whispering voice on her ear made her nervous. Her world was rocking inside her. Was this gorgeous man really offering himself to her and actually free to be taken?
Donna was brought back to life with the butterfly touch of his lips on hers, so soft and caressing. She felt something sliding into her mouth and he broke apart. She took it and opened her eyes.
She had between her fingers the most amazing diamond ring she had ever seen. It was hers, and it was from him.
“This time I´m taking you with me. I won´t leave this island alone never again”
Her heart stopped and the air burst out of her lungs. She was frozen, and the pressure of her fingers lightened, so it fell on her lap.
He smiled, and took her hand and picked up the ring, sliding the nightgown to expose her legs on the way.
“What do you say?”
Donna looked at him and founds herself speechless. Sam was glad the look on her eyes was so different from 21 years ago. That picture of her pain had tortured him all this time. Now, he was free to make her happy, free to a well earned amend. It was priceless to see her eyes were pure reflection of him: wide happiness, pure love and growing desire. He slid the ring on her finger and kissed the back of her hand.
She pushed him back to the bed and crawl to straddle him. The soft curls falling at the sides of her head tickled his face. Walking her fingers through his chest, she said:
“After something like last night, you really need to ask?”
She kissed him and he turned to be on top of her. It was a battlefield of passion between their mouths. His hands were approaching her inner tight and lifting the dress. She pulled away giggling.
“Wait” she pleaded “Too many emotions to sink in so fast. I need to let it settle in. We´ll have a lifetime for this, and we have a lot to catch up with” He sat next to her.
She rested her head and her hand on his chest, in silence. Suddenly, she started to laugh. The fact she was pressing her face around his shirt softened the joyful sound of her laughter. It was clear and heart-felt. She was happy and complete.
“What´s so funny?” he asked, placing his fingers under her chin, to raise her head and met her gaze. Her frenzy quickly closed into a smile.
“It´s just… I can´t believe I´m 41, I love you and this happiness of being engaged… to you. To get married soon, you better”
“Yes, it is surprising: you´re already 41”
She slapped him slightly and laughed again. Why was he so irresistible?
“And we can marry as soon as you want”
She smiled at the soft touch of his lips.
“You do want to stay here with me, right? I can´t leave all this, my…”
“Our life is here, this is what I’ve been longing for”
She lied on the bed face down, with her head on her hands and moving her foot up and down.
“This is shocking” she asserted, staring at her hand “How did we get to this, after all this years? What secret magic brought you back to me?”
“I like to think it was meant to be” his face was leveled with hers, their noses tickling each other´s.
“I like that. How good would you say last night was?” she asked, trying to smile, and hoping he would find it good enough.
“11 level perfection” She opened her eyes wide and grinned.
“In a scale of 10?”
“Indeed”
“And what´s the extra point for?”
“Just because it was you and nobody else” She raised her head to meet his lips.
“You know, I think it was even better. And tell me, my dear husband, what´s next?”
“I think there´s something you said you want me to do, and you don´t need to beg” He pulled her into his arms kissing her neck but she ran away.
“I think I´m feeling quite… dirty. We can take a bath… care to join?”
Donna took her nightgown out and dropped it to him, waiting for her man to follow. No more lonely nights.
After all the years, she won her special golden prize. It was the final score. And the winner took it all.
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Hey, great story, I like the way you’ve written it and the details you’ve added. It’s easy to follow as well as you’ve used simple language and it’s descriptive , the only thing I don’t understand in it is that, is the Donna 41 years old and the guy is 21 years of age or has it been 21 years to their relationship?
ReplyDeleteOh by the way, I really like the idea about the diamond ring, while kissing he moves the ring in her mouth. Good happy ending as well .:)
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ReplyDeleteTo Niki
ReplyDeleteFirstly thanks your comment posted on my draft.
Yours story was interesting, and I could say it sounds better for me than the Original ver., ha-ha...
In the text, the conversation between the two characters is good described, because it could attract people`s interest and read through to the end.
However, I’m bit misunderstanding about the timeline in your draft. Are the Donna and Sam in the same age? Or they are in different Space time?? Hope you solve this problem in the final ver.
Good luck at all!!